One day I went to a river and there was a cave.
There were also vines and no one was there. I can smell fish and I can smell flowers.
I hear cars going passed. I can touch water and mud. I feel happy, relaxed and calm.
Thursday, August 13, 2020
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Hey it's Tutaki, I liked how you explained how the picture affected your senses. I feel like i could relate and I'd feel happy and relaxed too. Maybe next time you could describe the scene a with some adjectives to spice your writing up a bit.
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